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15．最近，网络投票越来越流行，几乎人人都参与了网络投票，在给人们带来好处的同时，也让人进退两难，不知道是否应该参与这样的投票，你班就此进行了讨论，请根据讨论结果，以"To vote or not to vote？"为题写一篇短文．

赞同	★参与现代生活的一种方式，与普通的投票活动没什么不同； ★方便容易，不受时间、地点的限制； ★反馈迅速可靠
反对	★使人们产生被迫的感觉； ★结果并不客观； ★可能会因商业目的被故意利用
你的观点	（1）…（2）…

注意：
（1）逐一陈述所有要点，适当发挥，不要简单翻译．
（2）词数：150左右．开头已写好，不计入总词数．
（3）参考词汇：反馈feedback
Online voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it．It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma．Recently，our class had a discussion about whether we should vote or not．Opinions are divided on this topic．                                       

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于图表类作文，根据提示信息最近，网络投票越来越流行，几乎人人都参与了网络投票，在给人们带来好处的同时，也让人进退两难，不知道是否应该参与这样的投票，你班就此进行了讨论，请根据讨论结果，以"To vote or not to vote？"为题写一篇短文，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从不同观点、理由及个人观点几个方面来讨论该话题 2、图表是文章的总体框架，要在图表的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：no more than仅仅是；make no difference没有区别；In addition另外；regardless of不管，不顾；Furthermore而且；However然而；Firstly首先；Secondly其次；Thirdly第三；take advantage of 利用；to some extent在某种程度上；Therefore因此
Some think that on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life．（高分句型一）It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which candidates go around to seek supports．（高分句型二）
From my point of view，internet voting，to some extent，is unfair，if not immoral，and cannot be trusted．（高分句型三）

解答    Online voting becomes increasingly popular，and many competitions get people involved in it．It is beneficial to some people，while it puts others into a dilemma．Recently，our class had a discussion about whether we should vote or not．Opinions are divided on this topic．
      Some think that on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed，since it is no more than a way to participate in public life．（高分句型一）It makes no difference from ordinary voting events，in which candidates go around to seek supports．（高分句型二）In addition，the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient，regardless of time and space．Furthermore，voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible．However，others are somewhat puzzled at its negative impacts on people and society．
      Firstly，people may feel forced when asked to do things that they don't want to．Secondly，voting of this kind does not depend on the strong points of the competitors，but rather on how many social-networking resources they have．Thirdly，the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes．
      From my point of view，internet voting，to some extent，is unfair，if not immoral，and cannot be trusted．（高分句型三）Therefore，rules should be worked out and strictly observed．Everyone in our society should help those in need，but it is more important to be sincere and earnest．

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