Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校计划周六举行主题为保护环境人人有责演讲比赛，请给交流生Chris写封邮件，邀请他参赛，内容包括：

1.邀请对方参赛；

2.告知比赛时间、地点；

3.就如何准备提出建议。

注意：1.词数80左右;

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

Dear Chris，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris，

Knowing that you have been concerned about the protection of our environment, I am delighted to tell you there is a speech entitled “Start from ourselves to protect our earth”. Here are more details.

As scheduled, the contest is to be held in our lecture hall by the Student Union on March 10th, 2020. You are supposed to get adequately prepared before the contest. Above all, it's strongly recommended that you should talk about the present corona virus outbreak which caused great loss to our lives and economy, and further analyze the causes and future prevention measures. Whoever feels interested and has a passion for this topic, please sign up for the contest as soon as possible. If you want to attend, please come to the school assembly hall, which is located in the third floor. Don't miss the chance of being a sponsor of protecting our planet, and some appealing prize is eagerly waiting for you.

Don't hesitate to take part! I'm sure you will do your part in protecting our earth.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，邀请交流生Chris参加主题为保护环境人人有责的演讲比赛。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

结构：三段式结构。第一段提出邀请。第二段告知详情和建议。第三段寒暄结束。

要求：1. 邀请对方参赛（be delighted to tell you）

2.询问相关情况

1）告知比赛时间、地点（in our lecture hall by the Student Union on March 10th, 2020）

2）就如何准备提出建议。（get adequately prepared; talk about the present corona virus outbreak）

3.寒暄结束

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

be delighted to; as scheduled; be supposed to; get prepared; talk about; do one’s part in

第三步：连词成句

1. Knowing that you have been concerned about the protection of our environment, I am delighted to tell you there is a speech entitled “tart from ourselves to protect our earth”.

2. As scheduled, the contest is to be held in our lecture hall by the Student Union on March 10th, 2020.

3. You are supposed to get adequately prepared before the contest.

4. Above all, it's strongly recommended that you should talk about the present corona virus outbreak which caused great loss to our lives and economy, and further analyze the causes and future prevention measures.

5. I'm sure you will do your part in protecting our earth.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改