Question

【题目】请阅读下面材枓，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Bike-sharing has taken off in China far faster than in any other market. The market has become flooded with new companies in recent months. The bike-sharing companies operate in a similar way. They use apps that allow users, after paying a deposit, to unlock the wheels with their smartphones. After the journey, users can leave bikes anywhere in public and pay a little money for the use. The service is very popular as it provides an effective solution to “the last kilometer” problem.

The promoting of the bike-sharing service is also raising questions about profitability, wide-spread bike vandalism (破坏) and theft, and growing government regulation. A Hong Kong man who was arrested for throwing several shared bikes into rivers said he had no regret destroying them because ‘the GPS devices in the bikes give away users' personal information, such as their locations.”

【写作内容】

1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

2.用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：

（1）支持或反对共享单车的推广；

（2）用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。

【写作要求】

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇还贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】Possible version one

The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country, with more companies springing up in the market. The service not only brings great convenience to people, but causes some problems as well.

From my standpoint, bike-sharing system has become an essential part of public transportation in cities and should be actively promoted. Firstly, with an increasing number of people choosing the service to get around, the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically, which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams. Furthermore, this service also benefits individuals in various ways. For example, it provides locals and tourists with a convenient, cheap and healthy means of transport. Those who would otherwise use their own bicycles don’t need to be concerned about such problems as theft, storage and maintenance.

In a word, bike sharing is an innovative service, which relieves urban traffic pressure and brings citizens enormous benefits. And more shared bikes should be launched into the market. (163 words)

Possible version two

The passage conveys to us the bike-sharing boom across the country, with more companies springing up in the market. The service not only brings great convenience to people, but causes some problems as well.

In my opinion, bike-sharing should not be promoted at present for the following reasons. In order to attract more subscribers, the bike-sharing companies are flooding walkways and other public spaces with hundreds of bikes in the hope of promoting their services, which brings great inconvenience to pedestrians. Furthermore, for lack of relevant regulations, some uncivilized people deliberately damage shared-bikes, for example, by throwing them into rivers or piling them up randomly. A fairly high deposit fee has also been criticized in a country familiar with accessing inexpensive public services.

In conclusion, bike-sharing system shouldn’t be promoted before regulations and policies are put in place. The government, companies and users should all play their role in making bike-sharing sustainable and enjoyable. (156 words)

【解析】这是一篇材料作文。写作内容需要结合材料中所给信息。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2.要按照所给提纲进行写作，第一段用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：（1）支持或反对共享单车的推广；（2）用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，以提高文章的档次；注意使用一些连接词，使得文章表达自然、流畅。注意文章的字数控制，两方面的内容都各自有字数限制。

【范文亮点】所给范文观点不同，分别是支持和反对共享单车，但写作构思，文章结构相似。分析第一篇范文:文章层次分明，开头是简述信息主要内容，中间一段阐述观点时用了Firstly，Furthermore来衔接两个观点，使文章具有连贯性，结尾用in a word 来进行总结，同时文章多处运用从句，例如"the number of cars on the roads will decrease dramatically, which really helps the environment and reduces traffic jams"中运用了which定语从句，给文章增彩。

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