Question

【题目】众所周知，英特网在我们的日常生活中作用很大。请你说说英特网的主要用途：

信息：看国内外新闻、获取其它信息

通讯：发e-mail、打电话

学习：上网上学校、阅读各种书籍、自学外语

娱乐：欣赏音乐、观看体育比赛、玩棋牌游戏

生活：购物

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

As is known to us all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life．On the Internet，we can read news at home and abroad and get as much information as we can．We often send e-mails or make telephone calls to our families as well as to our friends.

Besides that，we can go to school on the net，read a variety of books and even teach ourselves English．We can also enjoy music，watch ball matches on the net and play computer games.

We can do shopping even without leaving our homes. The internet is really important.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据所给要点，介绍英特网的主要用途。写作时，我们可以根据需要将这些信息进行整理和安排，使文章的意思衔接更自然。文中所使用的词汇和句型，是学生们比较熟悉的，所以将平时的积累发挥出来就可以。当然我们要尽量使用一些好的句型和连词，使文章上下文意思连贯，更出彩。

写作亮点：这是一篇非常优秀的作文，短文中作者按照题目的要求条理清楚，结构清晰，要点全面。而且作者在写作时，并不是完全按照题目中给出的顺序，逐句翻译的，而是将这些信息进行了整合，让意思关联紧密的放在一起表达。短文中的语言合乎英语的表达规范，而且作者还使用了一些较好的词汇和句式，增强了文章的连贯性。如As is known to us all，as much information as we can，as well as，a variety of等词汇。