Question

假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛，请撰写一份演讲稿，内容主要包括：

目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；

骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康、是一种低碳的生活方式，等等。

参考词汇：低碳生活(low-carbon lifestyle)

注意：1.词数：120字左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone,

I’m Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then?

As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health. Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us !

Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：要求撰写演讲稿，这属于应用文写作。注意条理要清晰，逻辑顺序和结构要恰当，同时要尽量保持简洁精干的内容，不拖泥带水。要注意题中所给的信息，不可偏题，应用文写作对于文章内容的要求是要达到写作目的。尽量保持卷面整洁，字体美观，注意行文的连贯性。时态：一般现在时。结构上：可采取总分模式。使用一些高级句型和词汇提升作文档次。

【亮点说明】因为是演讲比赛，所以在文章开头介绍自己和自己演讲的题目。第二句As is known to all,众所周知，引出现状。后面紧接着用了一个with the improvement of people’s living standards随着人们生活水平提高这是with的符合结构。bringing great convenience to our life.给我们的生活带来了方便，这里是非谓语动词做伴随状语。第三句开始引入话题，句首用了一个however，表示转折。第二段As far as I’m concerned,就我而言、我认为，这里引出自己的观点。For one thing…For another经常用来陈述观点，一方面如何如何让，另一方面又如何如何。第三句What’s more此外、第四句therefore因此，都是很好的连词，由于清晰文章层次。文章中比较好的短语有 environmentally friendly环境友好型、give off释放、it is beneficial to …对…有好处、take the responsibility to负起责任去做…、build up建立。文章不仅运用了大量的精炼词汇，还使用了很多适当的连词，提升了文章的档次。

考点：考察应用文写作。