Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

During last summer holiday, I found part-time job, worked in a toothbrush factory at night. Not until I experienced it did I realized that it was no easy job. I went to work when my parents were going to bed. On the morning, when my parents were going to work, I came to home to sleep.

This backward schedule was very tough for me that I often felt tiring. But I am glad that I had this forgettable experience. Not only is it kind of fun to “rise and shine” along with the moon or stars, but also I learn to appreciate the hard work of those which are working while the rest of us are sleeping.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】found后加a

【2】worked→working

【3】realized→realize

【4】On→In

【5】came后面的to去掉

【6】very→so

【7】tiring→tired

【8】forgettable→unforgettable

【9】or→and

【10】which→who

【解析】

试题分析：本文是作者暑假打工的感悟。

【1】found后加a 句意：我找到一份临时工作。故在found后加a。

【2】worked→working 现在分词作后置定语，表主动关系，故把worked改为working。

【3】realized→realize 此处Not until I experienced it did I realized是部分倒装，因为前面有did，故后面要用动词原形，故把realized改为realize。

【4】On→In 固定词组：in the morning“在上午”，故把On改为In。注意大写开头。

【5】came后面的to去掉 home是副词，前面不需要介词，故把to去掉。

【6】very→so 固定搭配：so...that...“如此……以致于……”，故把very改为so。

【7】tiring→tired 句意：我感到累。形容人的感受用-ed形式的形容词。故把tiring改为tired。

【8】forgettable→unforgettable 句意：我很高兴我有这次难忘的经历。故把forgettable改为unforgettable。

【9】or→and 表示“月亮和星星”。故把or改为and。

【10】which→who 根据句意可知，those指人，所以后面的定语从句用who引导，故把which改为who。