Question

20．随着人们的生活水平越来越高，有不少人忽视了体育锻炼．你班学生就这一话题组织了一次班级讨论，请对以下列举的体育锻炼的好处进行补充，并说说自己所喜爱的运动项目．

体育锻炼的好处	1．对身体有好处； 2．能够缓解压力； … （至少补充两个要点）
你喜欢的运动项目	（请加以说明）

【写作要求】
1．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2．不必写标题；
3．词数150左右．
【评分标准】
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．
Physical exercise is a necessary part of our life．However，still some people do not like to attend sports activities．They think those activities waste their time and influence their study．
Indeed，it is very unwise for people to keel distance from physical exercise．Physical exercise is very beneficial to us．First of all，attending sports activities is an effective way to relieve pressure and keep a pleasant mood．Besides，by attending physical activities，people can have chances to contact and communicate with others，which can help them improve their skills．Nowadays our government provides many sports facilities for our citizens to do physical exercise．People can choose freely according to their interest and needs．
As for me，I am keen on all kinds of ball games，especially football and basketball．From these games，I have gained great pleasure and made many friends．In conclusion，everybody should not hesitate to attend sports activities．．

Answer 1

分析 这是关于体育锻炼的一篇作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一一些人对体育锻炼的负面看法；二论述体育锻炼的好处；三自己喜欢的运动项目．
高分句型：
1．First of all，attending sports activities is an effective way to relieve pressure and keep a pleasant mood．句子里First of all表示"首先"，和后面的Besides，Nowadays呼应；attending sports activities 是动名词做主语；relieve pressure 表示"缓解压力"．
首先，参加体育活动是缓解压力和保持愉快情绪的有效方法．
2．Besides，by attending physical activities，people can have chances to contact and communicate with others，which can help them improve their skills．句子里by attending physical activities是方式状语，表示"通过参加体育锻炼"； which 引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句people can have chances to contact and communicate with others．
此外，通过参加体育锻炼，人们有机会和其他人接触和交流，这有助于他们提高他们的技能．

解答 Physical exercise is a necessary part of our life．However，still some people do not like to attend sports activities．They think those activities waste their time and influence their study．（一些人对体育锻炼的负面看法）
    Indeed，it is very unwise for people to keep distance from physical exercise．Physical exercise is very beneficial to us．First of all，attending sports activities is an effective way to relieve pressure and keep a pleasant mood．【高分句型一】Besides，by attending physical activities，people can have chances to contact and communicate with others，which can help them improve their skills．【高分句型二】Nowadays our government provides many sports facilities for our citizens to do physical exercise．People can choose freely according to their interest and needs．（论述体育锻炼的好处）
    As for me，I am keen on all kinds of ball games，especially football and basketball．From these games，I have gained great pleasure and made many friends．In conclusion，everybody should not hesitate to attend sports activities．（自己喜欢的运动项目）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．