Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。校学生会将于本月底举办高中英语戏剧比赛，请根据以下信息，给你班的美国交换生Peter写封邮件，告知这件事。邮件的内容包括：

1. 比赛的具体时间和地点；

2. 比赛的目的；

3. 恳请Peter参加。

注意：1. 词数不少于50；

2. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m writing to tell you about the English play competition to be held this month. It will be held in the lecture hall at 4:00 p.m. on November 30th. The students’ union organizes this activity in order to motivate us to learn English and enrich our after-class lives. Each class is required to perform one short play which will be written and directed by students themselves. We all hope you can join us to perform a wonderful play for our class.

Looking forward to your active participation.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出，写作时可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，格式正确，结构严谨，运用高级句子。I’m writing to tell you about the English play competition to be held this month.动词不定式一般式的被动式作后置定语；It will be held in the lecture hall at 4:00 p.m. on November 30th. 一般将来时态的被动语态；The students’ union organizes this activity in order to motivate us to learn English and enrich our after-class lives.运用目的状语；Each class is required to perform one short play which will be written and directed by students themselves.句中使用定语从句；We all hope you can join us to perform a wonderful play for our class. 宾语从句恰到好处。