Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

On December 10th last year, we paid a visit of a high-tech agricultural garden. It took us one and a half hour to get there. The natural environment there was very pleased, and we could breathe fresh air. The intelligent glass greenhouse, where many kinds of fruits and vegetables were growing there, was really amazing. Though it was very cold outside, the greenhouse controlling by a computer could provide a proper temperature. That was also very interesting to be surrounded with different plants. We could see so many colorful fruits and vegetables in the greenhouse where all of us have never seen before. Luckily, we allowed to taste some of the fruits and vegetables. We really had the good time and learned a lot from the visit.

Answer 1

【答案】1. of—to

2. hour---hours

3. pleased---pleasing/pleasant

4. 去掉there

5. controlling—controlled

6. That---It

7. where----which

8. have—had

9. were allowed

10. the---a

【解析】1.a visit to---，对---的一次访问，故把of—to。

2.句意：一个半小时。用名词复数形式，故把hour---hours。

3.句意：那里的自然环境是令人愉快的。故把pleased---pleasing/pleasant。

4. The intelligent glass greenhouse, where many kinds of fruits and vegetables were growing there,此句greenhouse是先行词，在后面的非限制性定语从句中做地点状语，由where引导，可知there是多余的，故去掉。

5.句意：尽管外面的天气很冷，但是被电脑控制的温室的温度是合适的。此处过去分词做后置定语，故把controlling—controlled。

6.具有：被不同的植物包围着也是非常有趣的。此处是it做形式上的主语，动词不定式做真正的主语，故把that---it。

7.此句中the greenhouse是先行词，指物，在后面的定语从句中做宾语，故把where---which。

8. 通篇过去时态, 叙述参观工厂已是过去, 这里句意是参观工厂之前没见过, 所以应该是过去的过去, 要用过去完成时，故把have—had。

9. 在这里“我们”和“允许”之间是被动关系, 因此要用被动语态, 时态是一般过去时，故在we和 allowed之间加were。

10. have a good time为固定搭配, 表示玩的开心, 玩的愉快，故把the---a。