Question

假设你是李华，请就食品卫生问题，给某报社英文栏目编辑写一封100词左右的信，内容要点如下：

1．你的邻居因食用从市场买回来的伪劣食品中毒；

2．你目睹了他们中毒与在邻里帮助下脱险的经过；

3．呼吁社会各界重视食品卫生与安全；打击牟取暴利的不法商贩。

注意：信的开头与落款已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：伪劣食品fake food ; 卫生 hygiene

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident._________________________________________

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                                                                                      Yours,

                                                                                      Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear editor,

       I’m writing to tell you about a food poisoning incident. Several days ago, my neighbor family ate a bag of fake food from the market. After the meal, they had stomachaches and brought up what they had eaten as their faces turned pale. Fortunately, another neighbor passed by only to find the accident and immediately called the ambulance, which carried them quickly to hospital. After several hours’ treatment they finally escaped from death.

From this all of us have realized the importance of food safety. As some illegal business men are only interested in making profits in the race to become rich quickly, they seldom care about the necessary safety measures and hygiene or care what happens to consumers. They must be charged by law. Meanwhile I do hope the whole society shall begin taking actions to protect people’s life safety.

                                                                                 Yours,

                                                                                         Li Hua

解析:

本文要开门见山，首先点明主旨。可以应用一些比较复杂的句式，使文章比较出彩。文章句式精炼。用熟悉的句型、短语去表达。语言的组织和层次感很强。同时连词的使用要注意，如not only, but also ,让文章的重点突出，同时也起到了强调和吸引注意的目的。