Question

第二节书面表达（满分35分）
假如你是李华，女，17岁。请根据所给中、英文提示，用英文邮件形式向学生会写申请。

情况简介	申请理由
英语成绩优异；英语家教经验两年；	愿意帮助儿童；
学校“英语俱乐部”成员	增长见识，了解社会；
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注意：1.词数：100左右。2.邮件开关和结尾已为你写好。3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4.参考词汇：tutor vi. & n.家教 
Dear Student union,
I am Li Hua, a girl of 17. I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and
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I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@ yahoo.com.cn. 
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Possible Version:
Dear Student Union,
I am Li Hua, a girl of 17. I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers. Now I’m writing here to apply for this opportunity.
I have a good command of English. For two years I have been tutoring primary school kids in English. Presently I work as a member of the English Club in our school.
In my opinion, being a volunteer teacher at the SOS village is obviously more than just teaching; furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizon and improve our understanding of the world. Besides, voluntary work will build our confidence and good communication skills. By helping those kids, I feel I can make a big difference to their future and make a small contribution to society.
I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application.
I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@ yahoo.com.cn.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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