Question

假如你是李华，上周六你们班组织了一次志愿者活动，去敬老院看望慰问老人。根据下表中所提供的信息，讲述这次活动的情况，并谈谈自己的感受。 提示词：gerocomium 敬老院， the elderly 老年人

Time	9:00---11:00,  last Saturday
Place	the gerocomium near our school
Volunteer work	took a lot of presents to,  performed program(表演节目)， talked with the elderly， ……..
feeling (感受)	……..

要求：1. 不少于60词；2.内容要点可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;  3.开头已经给出。
Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the gerocomium（敬老院）.
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Answer 1

Last Saturday, my class organized a volunteer activity to the gerocomium（敬老院）. My classmates and I went to the gerocomim near our school. We took a lot of presents to the elderly. Some of us performed wonderful program，such as singing, dancing. We also asked them to join us and they were very happy. Some of us talked with the elderly seriously. They told us a lot about their lives.
All of us were happy because we did something good to others. In my opinion, we should spend more time helping the elderly. Love the elderly is Chinese people’s virtue.

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