Question

18．假如你叫李华，你的好朋友李明英语听力水平不高，每次考试因此失很多分．他很苦恼，特向你求助．请帮他分析他目前听力存在的若干问题，并给他写一封信提出一些切实可行的建议．
注意：=1．词数100词左右；
=2．可适当发挥使行文连贯．
Dear Li Ming，
I'm sorry to hear that you are not doing very well in your English listening．As a result，you scored quite low in each test．
One reason is your limited vocabulary and another is the lack of practice．Here is my advice to help you out．First，you'd better make a plan to enlarge your vocabulary by memorizing a few words and expressions every day．Second，do spend a proper amount of time listening to English materials every day．On average，the time ranges from 10 to 20 minutes per day．Third，practice listening skills regularly．
As you know，hard work pays off．So long as you keep on trying，you're sure to make great progress．
Looking forward to your good news．

Yours，
Lihua

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）do spend a proper amount of time listening to English materials every day．
该句型使用了强调句，即在spend前加do，句意为的确要花大量的时间来听．
（高分句型二）So long as you keep on trying，you're sure to make great progress
该句型使用了as long as引导的条件状语从句，意思是只要你继续努力，你肯定会取得进步；
高级词汇：enlarge扩大；memorize记忆；On average平均；range from to 范围从…； pay off有所回报；

解答 Dear Li Ming，
       I'm sorry to hear that you are not doing very well in your English listening．As a result，you scored quite low in each test．
   （分析原因）One reason is your limited vocabulary and another is the lack of practice．Here is my advice to help you out．First，you'd better make a plan to enlarge your vocabulary by memorizing a few words and expressions every day．Second，（高分句型一）do spend a proper amount of time listening to English materials every day．On average，the time ranges from 10 to 20 minutes per day．Third，practice listening skills regularly．
     As you know，hard work pays off．（高分句型二）So long as you keep on trying，you're sure to make great progress．（表达对他有信心）
     Looking forward to your good news．
                                                                                                                                                        Yours truly，
                                                                                                                                                         Li Hua

点评 开放类作文在写作时要注意内容是否切合所给主题，写作时注意正确运用时态，上下文注意连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需要注意积累短语和重要句型．