Question

假设你叫王成。你的英国笔友Rose想了解你校学生的体育锻炼情况，请根据下图信息，给她写一封信，简要陈述你的看法。

75%的学生不参加体育锻炼	1. 不爱好体育锻炼； 2. 无锻炼场地； 3. 学习负担重。
25%的学生参加体育锻炼	......

注意：

1．词数120左右；

2．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Rose,

As we enter Senior Three, fewer and fewer students do physical training. ____________________

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Best wishes!

Wang Cheng

 

Answer 1

【答案】

不唯一

One possible version

Dear Rose,

As we enter Senior Three, fewer and fewer students do physical training. According to a survey, only 25% of the students do sports. They can benefit a lot from sports. There are many reasons for students not doing physical training. Some students complain that they have too much homework to do and have not enough time to do exercise. Some of them say that they aren’t fond of doing physical training since childhood. Others say that they live far away from places where they can do physical training. Because of all these, many of us lack physical training and are in poor health.

In my view, we should realize the importance of taking exercise. Firstly, without health, we can’t learn well. Only in good health can we learn attentively. Secondly, as we all know, time is a spongy. We can find time to do exercise if study and physical training are balanced. In all, once we lose our health, we gain nothing. Let’s do physical training right now.   

Best wishes,

Wang Cheng

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，且是一篇信件，所以要用第一人称来写。需要写.的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的信件。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头与结尾，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数120左右，不要太多也不要太少。

考点：提纲作文

点评：本文属于书信，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。