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3．假定你校将举行ー个成人仪式，你将作为代表在仪式上发言．请你按以下内容要点准备ー篇 英文发言稿．
1．过去对成人的美好向往；
2．现在对成人的初步认识．
注意：1．发言稿的开头与结束语已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2．文中不能出现真实的姓名、身份信息．
 
Good morning，everyone!
 
Thank you for listening．

Answer 1

分析 亮点句型一：As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked．本句是一个复合句，
that I could grow up as soon as possible是hope的宾语从句，so that引导的是一个结果状语从句，在这个状语从句中whatever I wanted 与whatever I liked是宾语从句．
 亮点句型二：Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grownup not only means this，but also more responsibilities．尽管我能够享受更多的自由，但是同时我意识到作为一个成年人不仅仅意味着自由而且是更多的责任．这是一个由although引导的让步状语从句，其中 that being a grownup not only means this，but also more responsibilities是一个宾语从句．

解答 Good morning，everyone!
      The topic of my speech today is"Thoughts on becoming a grown-up．"
      As a child，I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could have whatever I wanted and do whatever I liked（亮点句型一）．【对成人的美好向往】Now I'm a grownup，but I find things do not go as I expected．Although I can enjoy more freedom，at the same time I realize that being a grownup not only means this，but also more responsibilities（亮点句型二）．I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life more meaningful．【对成人的初步认识】To reach the goal，I must first try my best to pass the college entrance examination and enter a good university．【个人观点阐述】
Thank you for your listening．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．