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【题目】高中阶段，学业繁重，为了保证学习时间，学校决定在高三取消体育课。但学生普遍认为应该劳逸结合，体育锻炼在高三也是必不可少的。现请你给校长写一篇保留一节体育课的倡议信.。

注意：1.内容包括：（1）取消体育课的弊端；

（2）说明课外活动和体育活动的必要性和益处，至少三点。

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 词数100左右

Dear headmaster,

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Yours sincerely,

student

Answer 1

【答案】Dear headmaster,

It is known that our school intends to cancel our sports class when we are in Grade 3. Teachers and parents may agree, for there is only one year left for us to take the college entrance exam. However, we students hold the view that we should combine work and rest.

First of all, supposing there is no sports class, we will have no time to take exercise, which will badly influence our body health. Besides, actively taking part in sports activities will not only make our school life colorful, but also improve our learning. In addition to building our bodies and enriching our knowledge, the activities also free ourselves from the heavy work of study. Last but not least, to be well prepared for the final exam, it is necessary that senior students attach importance to take exercise and keep healthy.

In a nutshell, it is strongly recommended that our school arrange one sports class a week for us. Looking forward to your agreement. Thank you very much.

Yours sincerely,

student

【解析】本文书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封倡议信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇是一封倡议信：高中阶段，学业繁重，为了保证学习时间，学校决定在高三取消体育课。但学生普遍认为应该劳逸结合，体育锻炼在高三也是必不可少的。现请你给校长写一篇保留一节体育课的倡议信.。注意：1.内容包括：（1）取消体育课的弊端；（2）说明课外活动和体育活动的必要性和益处，至少三点。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 词数100左右。

第2步：根据写作要求确定关键词，如：It is known that（众所周知）；cancel our sports class（取消我们的体育课）；the college entrance exam（高考）；In addition to（除了---之外）；Last but not least（最后但并不是最不重要的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态语态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。

【亮点说明】

本文是一封倡议信，格式正确，内容符合要求，文章结构布局合理，文找那个使用高级词汇和句子。It is known that our school intends to cancel our sports class when we are in Grade 3.主语从句和when引导的时间状语从句完美结合；Teachers and parents may agree, for there is only one year left for us to take the college entrance exam.此句中for是一个并列连词；to be well prepared for the final exam, it is necessary that senior students attach importance to take exercise and keep healthy.动词不定式一般式的被动式做目的状语；另外，However, First of all, Besides, In addition to，Last but not least, In a nutshell,等的运用为文章增色添彩。