Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿； 2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由；

3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议； 4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。

注意：

1. 词数100字左右，开头语已为你写好；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；

Hi Sharon,

This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm

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Answer 1

【答案】

Hi Sharon,

This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it. I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.

Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well, you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.

In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.

Hope for you early reply!

Yours Sincerely

Li Xia

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文。动笔前，首先要仔细审题：审要求，审文体，审时态，审人称。其次。抓中心，列重点。写作时要切题，紧扣要点。同时，注意层次结构，尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。

【亮点说明】

1. 要点齐全，结构完整。使用了大量短语使用多种句式。例如：定语从句：by which you are sure to make great progress；which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. 表语从句It is just what I want. 动名词作主语Speaking and listening are very important等等。

2. 文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，并注意了句子之间的衔接，如：In addition,；Besides,等等。