Question

【题目】假如你叫李华，你发现有些同学常常因为考试而感到焦虑。为此你向一家英文报社写信，反映这个问题，并提出建议。

要点如下：

1. 对此表示理解。

2. 提出三条合理建议。

注意：1. 词数：120词左右，短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2. 短文要包括所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。

3. 注意人称使用。

Dear Editor,

I am writing to tell you that many students experience exam anxiety in our school.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear editor,

I am writing to tell you that many students experience exam anxiety in our school.

It is natural that we feel a bit nervous before exams, but some students have real trouble managing their anxiety, which of course will affect their performance in the exams. Here I’d like to give those students some tips on how to get rid of the stress.

First of all, it’s important to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. At the same time, study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. If we are prepared, we will not feel worried. However, if anyone still finds himself much too stressed, don’t hesitate to seek some professional help from the school psychologist.

At last, I hope all of us will be free from anxiety and do our best in exams.

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇书信写作。文章的大致内容已经给出，但其中的第二条内容却是靠考生自己联系实际自由发挥的，发展空间很大写作时要注意句与句，段与段之间连词的使用。以保证文章的连贯性。

亮点说明：文章内容分为三部分：除却题目已给出的句子外，题目所要求的第一个内容用it is natural that句型一笔带过，然后用but引导的句子和here引导的句子过渡到第二个内容，最后用at last 进行衔接，表达愿望，结构清楚，内容连贯。本文使用了许多句子结构some students have real trouble managing their anxiety, which of course will affect their performance in the exams.使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句， there is no need to worry too much about the results使用了there is no need 句型，If we are prepared, we will not feel worried. 中if语句的使用，don’t hesitate to seek some professional help from the school psychologist.祈使句的使用等等；文中连词也使用的恰到好处，比如first of all，at the same time，however等等使语言连贯。本文还用来许多好的短语，如;have a right attitude towards，a means of，I’d like to，seek some professional help。