Question

7．微笑是世界语言，它可以给人勇气、信心、安慰…，让人与人之间的相处更加和谐．请你用英语写一篇关于微笑的短文，词数100～120．要求如下：
1．描述一次与微笑有关的经历；
2．说说你的感受及微笑的意义．
注意：开头已给出（不计入总词数）．
Smiling is a universal language，which can give us courage，confidence and comforts．                                 ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于微笑的短文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称来叙述，时态以一般过去时态（叙述一次与微笑有关的经历）和一般现在时态（叙述自己的感受及微笑的意义）．内容主要包括：一一次与微笑有关的经历；二自己的感受及微笑的意义．
高分句型：
1．I think smiling not only makes us happy but also helps build up our confidence，which makes a difference to our life．句子里not only…but also表示"不但…而且"；which 引导非限制性定语从句，代指主句．
我认为微笑不仅让我高兴，而且有助于增强我们的自信，这会对我们有很大的影响．
2．Only when you smile to the world will the world smile at you．
句子里Only 引导状语位于句首，主句用倒装will the world smile at you．
只有当你对世界微笑的时候，世界才会对你微笑．

解答 Smiling is a universal_language，which_can give_us_courage，confidence and_comforts．
I still remember how upset I was when it was my turn to recite a poem before class．Feeling nervous and shy，I forgot almost everything．I decided to give up，but all my classmates，especially my teacher kept smiling at me encouragingly．Their smiles warmed me so much that I got over the difficulty and eventually made it．（一次与微笑有关的经历）
I think smiling not only makes us happy but also helps build up our confidence，which makes a difference to our life．【高分句型一】Furthermore，it will improve the relationship between us．It's smiling that brings harmony to our life．Only when you smile to the world will the world smile at you．【高分句型二】Therefore，keep smiling and show your best to the world．（自己的感受及微笑的意义）

点评 考查提纲类作文．
本文用了部分倒装．部分倒装主要有以下几种：
1．用于疑问句．
例如：Do they work in the factory？他们在这家工厂上班吗？
2．用于省略的虚拟条件状语从句．
例如：Had I seen him yesterday wouldn't go to his house now．如果我昨天见到他了，我现在就不去他家了．
3．用于"形容词（或名词、动词）+as （ though ）"引导的让步状语从句中．例如：
Try as he would，he might failed again．他虽然可以试试，可能还会失败．
4．用于 no sooner …than …，hardly …when 和 not until 等句型．
No sooner had I come in，the telephone rang．我刚进屋，电话铃就响了．
5．用于 never，hardly，seldom，scarcely，barely，little，at no time，not only 等开头的句子．
Seldom does he come late．他很少迟到．
6．用于"only+状语"开头的句子．
Only then did he know he was wrong．直到那时他才知道他错了．
7．用于"so+形容词/副词"放在句首的 so …that 句子．
So fast is he running that he can keep up with the bike．他跑得快得能跟上自行车．