Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你们班计划为即将回国的美籍外教 Peter举行欢送会。请用英语给他写封邮件，邀请他参加。内容包括：

1.活动时间和地点；

2活动目的和内容；

3.期待他参加。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Peter,

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Yours

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

Learning you’re going back home soon, we’ll hold a farewell party for you. I’m writing to invite you to participate.

The party will take place in Classroom 302 this Sunday, which will last from 6 p.m. to 8 p.m. It’s aimed at expressing our gratitude for your kind help. Thanks to your help, we’ve made great progress in English learning. Besides, we want to deepen our friendship through the party. At the party, we’ll dance and sing together. In the end, we’ll give you gifts in return for your help. You’re expected to talk about your stay here and your plan for the future.

I’d appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是一封邀请信。假定你是李华，你们班计划为即将回国的美籍外教 Peter举行欢送会。请用英语给他写封邮件，邀请他参加。

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1.活动时间和地点；2活动目的和内容；3.期待他参加。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：hold a farewell party，invite you to participate ，take place，be aimed at expressing our gratitude for your kind help，Thanks to your help，make great progress in English learning，deepen our friendship through the party，in return for your help，at your earliest convenience。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First；Secondly/Second… ，And then；Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。