Question

12．假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华．上周六你和同学骑共享单车去购书时看到某些不文明现象．请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以"Our Meaningful Work"为题，给校刊"英语角"写一篇英文稿件，介绍事情的整个过程．
注意：词数不少于60．
提示词：共享单车 shared bicycle

Our Meaningful Work
Last Saturday my classmates and I did some meaningful work as we went to buy books．
That afternoon we rode shared bicycles to Beijing Book Building as planned．Everyone was excited，enjoying the convenience brought about by the shared bicycles．However，something unexpected happened on arrival．We noticed the shared bicycles parked here and there，blocking the way of the passersby．One of my classmates proposed placing them in order，so we got down to work immediately．It took us about twenty minutes to finish the work．Seeing the tidily arranged bicycles，we all felt delighted．We also received high praise for what we had done．
The experience caused my concern about shared bicycles．I think we should put them in place after using them，which not only brings us neat and tidy environment，but also reflects qualities of a good citizen．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇看图写作．写作要点暗含在所给四幅图画中，只需描述四幅画所含信息，并适当发表些自己的见解即可．注意文章使用的时态，看图写作多使用一般过去时．写作过程中注意使用平时学到的短语和句型，注意行文的连贯和逻辑性．
（高级句型一）Everyone was excited，enjoying the convenience brought about by the shared bicycles．
enjoying…是现在分词做状语，表示伴随状况；
（高级句型二）We noticed the shared bicycles parked here and there，blocking the way of the passersby．
该句式notice+宾语+过去分词；blocking…现在分词表示结果；
（高级句型三）I think we should put them in place after using them，which not only brings us neat and tidy environment，but also reflects qualities of a good citizen．
which引导非限制性定语从句，指前面整个事情；
高级词汇：unexpected意料之外；propose建议； got down to 开始做；It took us about twenty minutes to 做某事花了多少时间；not only…but also 不仅而且

解答 Our Meaningful Work
   Last Saturday my classmates and I did some meaningful work as we went to buy books．
   That afternoon we rode shared bicycles to Beijing Book Building as planned．（高级句型一）Everyone was excited，enjoying the convenience brought about by the shared bicycles．However，something unexpected happened on arrival．（高级句型二）We noticed the shared bicycles parked here and there，blocking the way of the passersby．One of my classmates proposed placing them in order，so we got down to work immediately．It took us about twenty minutes to finish the work．Seeing the tidily arranged bicycles，we all felt delighted．We also received high praise for what we had done．
   The experience caused my concern about shared bicycles．（高级句型三）I think we should put them in place after using them，which not only brings us neat and tidy environment，but also reflects qualities of a good citizen．

点评 本文是图画类写作，考生在写作前应仔细观察所给图画，再运用准确的、合适的语言结合实际将图片内容描述清楚．写作过程中切忌偏离主题，尽量做到图文搭配．