Question

【题目】环保部目前发布《中国环境噪声污染防治报告（2016）》，披露了全国城市噪声环境现状以及噪音防治工作的总体状况，其中，全国最“吵”的地方，并非京沪等特大城市，而是贵阳。请写一封信到市长信箱，内容应包括：

1.表达对贵阳面临的噪音问题的担忧；

2.分析造成该问题的原因（如车辆增加、城市建设等）；

3.提出适当建议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Mayor,

Recently, the environmental protection department has issued a report

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mayor，

Recently，the environmental protection department has issued a report concerning the noise pollution among China’s major cities．According to the report，our city，Guiyang，is faced with the most serious noise pollution，exceeding the super cities like Beijing and Shanghai and ranking the first in the list．

This phenomenon has drawn my great concern．From my point of view，the heavy noise pollution mainly comes from the ongoing increase of private cars and large scale city construction，which bring much inconvenience to people’s life．To ensure the living quality of our citizens，I suggest that the government should formulate some rules to limit the increase of private cars．Also，some facilities should be built and more trees planted to reduce the noise from city construction．

I hope my suggestions will be helpful and thank you for your reading．

Yours sincerely，

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文是写一封信到市长信箱，表达对贵阳面临的噪音问题的担忧，分析造成该问题的原因并提出恰当建议。此文可分三段来写，第一段介绍自己如何获悉此消息和此消息的内容；第二段表达担忧，分析原因，并提出建议；第三段总结全文。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。把提纲中的三点内容表述完整。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】

1.使用高级句型：包含非限制性定语从句的句子From my point of view, the heavy noise pollution mainly comes from the ongoing increase of private cars and large scale city construction, which bring much inconvenience to people’s life；虚拟语气的使用I suggest that the government should formulate some rules to limit the increase of private cars．2.使用了过渡词语：Also等。3.使用了重要短语：according to根据；be faced with面临；draw my great concern吸引我极大的注意。