Question

【题目】假如你是李华，正与同学一起进行市场调研(do a market research)，想了解国内超市是否销售以克隆动物(cloned animals)为原材料制成的食品。因为你还想知道美国超市的情况，所以就给美国朋友Mike写信。信中提及你对销售该种食品所持的态度，并希望Mike回信告知你美国超市是否销售该类食品。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike,

How is everything going on with you recently? Right now I, together with my classmates, am doing a market research into whether the domestic supermarkets are selling food from cloned animals. I am writing to you because I am curious about what is happening in American supermarkets.

On a personal note, food from cloned animals must be forbidden. Although many people assume that a clone is an exact copy of another animal, there are differences actually. For example, Dolly the sheep, the first cloned mammal, died at a much younger age than normal. As a result we can’t confirm that this kind of food is really safe for humans to eat.

I would appreciate it if you could write back to tell me the situation in the USA.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】一篇合格的应试类英语作文，首要的是内容上满足题目中给出的所有要点，这也是各个分数等级的评分标准中第一个考察点。试题题目中明确给出了内容要点：想了解美国超市是否销售以克隆动物(cloned animals)为原材料制成的食品。并谈对销售该种食品所持的态度，考生只要稍加注意，找到要点，并将每个要点写清楚，文章的基本分数就拿到了，更不至于跑题。此篇范文对写信目的部分描述得详尽到位，清楚的描述了真在做的事情和写作的目的，谈感想部分提到了反对看法，从而强调了基因食品营养的未知性。所以，内容分析得齐全是其成功之处。此篇范文的结构清晰，逻辑通顺合理。

【亮点说明】经典短语：going on with、together with、 On a personal note 、As a result以及宾语从句I, together with my classmates, am doing a market research into whether the domestic supermarkets are selling food from cloned animals.这些句子的运用也让文章增色不少。