Question

假设你是李明。上周末你的美国网友Jack在给你的电子邮件中问你打算在大学里学什么专业。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封100词左右的邮件。
礼节性的开头语并引出问题。
首先打算学农学。理由是：
农业是人类生存的基础。
还有很多人在挨饿。
你的雄心壮志。
学医也行；希望Jack提供建议

Answer 1

Dear Jack,
How is everything going?
In your last letter, you asked me what major I’d like to choose at university. I have two majors in mind.
First, I intend to choose agriculture science. Why? Because food is fundamental to our existence. However, food shortage is severe in many countries where many people are still going hungry and every second there are people starved to death. It is my hope that I can feed the world well through my research on organic farming.
Secondly, medicine is also one of my considerations, which, I think, is another worthy way to save lives. Can you give me some advice? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming

试题分析：本文是书信类作文，上周末你的美国网友Jack在给你的电子邮件中问你打算在大学里学什么专业。请你根据下面的提示，给他回一封100词左右的邮件。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且比较具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁。
【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：have …in mind考虑，intend to打算， look forward to盼望。 In your last letter, you asked me what major I’d like to choose at university. 这句话用了宾语从句， food shortage is severe in many countries where many people are still going hungry and every second there are people starved to death.这句话用了宾语从句， It is my hope that I can feed the world well through my research on organic farming这句话用了强调句，medicine is also one of my considerations, which, I think, is another worthy way to save lives. 这句话用了定语从句。还有文章还使用了First, Secondly, However,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。