Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim对中国的“新四大发明”(共享单车、高铁、在线支付和网购)很感兴趣，尤其是高铁，特写信向你询问。请你给他回信，从速度(时速250-350公里)、舒适度、关注度等方面向他介绍一下我国高铁。

注意:1、词数:100词左右；

2、开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

3、参考词汇:高铁 high-speed rail / high-speed trains

Dear Jim,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

Glad to hear from you. Knowing that you are interested in China’s “four great new inventions”, especially our high-speed trains, I’d like to give a brief introduction to you.

China’s high-speed rail runs at a speed of 250-350 km per hour, providing people with a convenient and popular transport choice. Besides, it’s equipped with comfortable seats and a free wireless network. Furthermore, because of its various advantages, it has come to the global attention and many countries have imported Chinese high-speed rail technology to upgrade their own rail transport systems.

I hope that the information above will be helpful to you. If you have any further questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封邮件。

第一步：

审题：邮件 介绍中国的高铁

人称：第三人称

时态：一般现在时

结构：总分法，分三部分，第一部分说明很高兴对方对我国的高铁感兴趣，第二部分介绍我国高铁的具体情况，第三部分希望所提供的信息对对方有帮助。

要点：

1. 说明很高兴对方对我国的高铁感兴趣

2．介绍我国高铁的具体情况

①速度：时速为每小时250—350公里

②舒适度：配备有舒适的座椅、免费无线网络

③关注度：引起全球关注，很多国家进口中国的高铁

3．希望所提供的信息对对方有帮助。

第二步：列提纲（重点词汇、短语）

be interested in；China’s “four great new inventions”；give a brief introduction；

at a speed of ；provide sb. with；choice；be equipped with；advantage；the global attention；import；upgrade；be helpful to

第三步：连词成句

(1) You are interested in China’s “four great new inventions”.

(2) China’s high-speed rail runs at a speed of 250-350 km per hour.

(3) It provides people with a convenient and popular transport choice.

(4) It’s equipped with comfortable seats and a free wireless network.

(5) It has come to the global attention.

(6) Many countries have imported Chinese high-speed rail technology to upgrade their own rail transport systems.

(7)I hope that the information above will be helpful to you.

根据提示和关键词进行遣词造句,适当地运用句型，注意时态和主谓一致问题。

第四步：连句成篇(衔接词)

表示时间顺序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或补充关系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示转折对比关系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果关系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence, consequently, thus

连句成文，运用恰当的衔接词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，使句与句之间逻辑性更强、

段与段之间结构清晰。