Question

请根据你对右边这幅画的理解用英语写一篇短文。内容要求：

 

1.描述漫画内容，如情景，人物，动作等。

2.结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想。

3.举例说明你能在尊老爱老方面做些什么。

注意：

1.词数120左右。

2.参考词汇：按摩 massage n.&v.

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Respecting the elders is a good virtue. As is shown in the picture, a granddaughter might have realized that her grandma is tired from doing housework, so she thinks that she should do something about it. So she gives her grandmother a gentle back massage, hoping that it can reduce her grandma’s tiredness.

This reminds me of my parents and grandparents who have been doing whatever they can do to let me have the best education. But, totally absorbed in my own study, I seldom take notice of their tiredness and never offer to do something to make them feel comfortable.

Now I know I can do my bit to help them with everyday cleaning, or at least clean my own bedroom, or massage their feet or legs before bedtime to help them reduce the tiredness. Meanwhile, I will work harder at my lessons. I know my progress is the best reward for their love.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据所给漫画写一篇短文，写作要点包括：描述漫画内容；结合自身谈谈感想；举例说明。看图作文先详细描述漫画的内容，包括情景、人物、动作等方面；词数在120词左右，用上参考词汇；不要出现标点和拼写错误，保持卷面整洁、字体美观；注意行文的连贯性。

亮点说明：

范文使用了非谓语动词Respecting the elders is a good virtue.，hoping that it can reduce her grandma’s tiredness，absorbed in；非限制性定语从句As is shown in the picture；虚拟语气might have realized；宾语从句that her grandma is tired from doing housework，that she should do something about it，whatever they can do，I can do my bit to help them with everyday cleaning；定语从句who have been doing whatever they can do等语法知识，其中，使用最多的是宾语从句，语法知识的使用提升了作文的档次；

范文使用But, Meanwhile,等衔接前后句子和段落，使作文语意连贯、通顺；

范文使用remind... of，take notice of，help...with，at least，work at等短语，充实了作文内容；

考点：看图作文