Question

13．A little girl whose parents had died lived with her grandmother and slept in an upstairs bedroom．
One night there was a fire in the house and the grandmother died while trying to rescue the child．The fire spread quickly，and the situation was terrible．
Neighbors called the fire department，then stood helplessly by，unable to enter the house because flames blocked all the entrances．The little girl appeared at an upstairs window，crying for help，just as word spread among the crowd that the firefighters would be delayed a few minutes because they were all at another fire．
Suddenly，a man appeared with a ladder，put it up against the side of the house and disappeared inside．When he reappeared，he had the little girl in his arms．He delivered the child to the waiting arms below，then disappeared into the night．
An investigation revealed that the child had no living relatives，and weeks later a meeting was held in the town hall to determine who would take the child into their home and bring her up．
A teacher said she would like to raise the child．She pointed out that she could ensure her a good education．A farmer offered her an upbringing（教养） on his farm．He pointed out that living on a farm was healthy and satisfying．Others spoke，giving their reasons why it was to the child's advantage to live with them．
Finally，the town's richest resident rose and said，"I can give this child all the advantages that you have mentioned here，plus money and everything that money can buy．"
Throughout all this，the child remained silent，her eyes on the floor．
"Does anyone else want to speak？"asked the meeting chairman．A man came forward from the back of the hall．He walked slowly and appeared to be in pain．
注意：
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When he got to the front of the room，he stood directly in front of the little girl and held out his arms．His hands and arms were terribly scarred．The little girl cried out，"This is the man who rescued me!"With a leap，she threw her arms around the man's neck．She buried her face in his shoulder and sobbed for a few moments．Then she looked up and smiled，stating happily she would live with him．
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When asked about her choice，the girl gave people the reasons firmly．She said in a low but determined voice，"I really desire to get a good education that will give me chances to live my dreams．Besides，I know that money means a lot to me since I have no relatives to rely on．But it's the man who saved my life when I was desperately facing a fire like that．Without him，I wouldn't be here，waiting for a new choice．I hope that I can do whatever I can to pay back his kindness．
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Answer 1

分析 本题特点是"读写结合"，考查考生阅读理解、要点概括、用英语叙事说理等多方面能力．解答此类试题，除了要注意一般写作规范之外，还要准确理解所给文章的中心思想并准确予以解读和概括．
亮点句型一：Then she looked up and smiled，stating happily she would live with him．然后她抬起头笑了笑，高兴地说她愿意和他住在一起．本句用非谓语动词中的现在分词stating在句中做状语．
亮点句型二：I hope that I can do whatever I can to pay back his kindness．我希望我能尽我所能来报答他的好意．本句中that I can do whatever I can to pay back his kindness是that引导的宾语从句，在这个宾语从句中whatever I can to pay back his kindness是由whatever引导的宾语从句．

解答 When he got to the front of the room，he stood directly in front of the little girl and held out his arms．His hands and arms were terribly scarred．The little girl cried out，"This is the man who rescued me!"With a leap，she threw her arms around the man's neck．She buried her face in his shoulder and sobbed for a few moments．Then she looked up and smiled，stating happily she would live with him．（亮点句型一）
    When asked about her choice，the girl gave people the reasons firmly．She said in a low but determined voice，"I really desire to get a good education that will give me chances to live my dreams．Besides，I know that money means a lot to me since I have no relatives to rely on．But it's the man who saved my life when I was desperately facing a fire like that．Without him，I wouldn't be here，waiting for a new choice．I hope that I can do whatever I can to pay back his kindness．（亮点句型二）

点评 读写任务写作是将阅读与写作有机结合起来，要求考生在读懂文章信息的基础上，按照要求有条理地写出所要表达的内容，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，提高文章的档次．