Question

【题目】：（25分）请你根据下面这幅漫画用英语写一篇短文。短文内容应该包括以下三个方面：

1．描述这幅漫画的内容。

2．是否同意他们的教育方式，并陈述理由。

3．对家庭教育提出建议。

注意： 1 词数100左右。 2 参考词汇： 溺爱 spoil

As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. _____________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】

As can be seen in the cartoon, the young couple educate their child in different ways. Father educates their child with a ruler but Mother with a bar of chocolate. What is shown in the picture is that Father is too hard on their child while Mother spoils him. The methods they adopt make their child confused．

I’m in favour of neither of their education methods. If we always give children severe punishment, they will become nervous or become violent and aggressive. If we always love children too much, they will turn out to be self-c entered and dependent, tending to do whatever they want to.

As far as I am concerned, it is better to use proper methods. Parents should try to keep the balance between love and strictness. Only in this way can children benefit from proper family education and achieve all-round development.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于漫画类书面表达。

漫画类书面表达属于看图作文的范畴，漫画通常被用来颂扬、批评或讽刺某种社会现象，并使读者从漫画中得到某些启示。漫画类书面表达基于这样的命题思路，通常要求考生看懂漫画，然后就漫画的内容进行表面的描述，再通过漫画联系实际，描述出漫画所反映的社会现实，最后要求考生针对这一现象谈谈自己的感受。

漫画类书面表达的解题步骤

1：读图。找准“题眼”，即题目中最关键的部分，透过题眼的表面现象把握内涵。

2：解意。解意时要遵循读图中确定的内涵，解决三个方面的问题：辨明褒贬，找准角度；联系生活，明辨主旨；推敲文字说明，搞清题目要求。

3：谋篇。首先对漫画主题（表层信息和深层含义）作初步解读，然后构思确立提纲，完成对主题的阐述。构思一般有三个步骤。

第一步：表象或现象描述，即概要描述漫画，揭示漫画所反映的社会现象。注意避免平铺直叙式的对漫画细节的简单描述。要对漫画分析解读后将有效信息进行概括性引用。

第二步：原因或根源分析，即详细阐述引起漫画表面现象的深层次原因或寓意。

第三步：评论或建议抒发，即简要评述漫画所揭示的寓意及从中得到的启发或建议。为了获得高分，通常需要结合本人或社会生活谈谈看法或观点。

【亮点说明】 本文清晰描述了漫画内容，理解了其内涵。内容结构紧凑，层次分明，观点明确。

文中使用了非常好的短语为文章增色不少，比如be too hard on；in favour of；too much；turn out to be…；tend to do…；keep the balance。还有两个复合结构make their child confused。同时运用了很好的几种句式：What is shown in the picture is that Father is too hard on their child while Mother spoils him.（状语从句和表语从句）；As far as I am concerned（据我所知）；Only in this way can children…（倒装句式）。还运用了非谓语结构，如tending to do whatever they want to。这些结构使得结构紧凑，表达清晰。