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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Alice,

I am very glad to hear of you.Knowing that you are interested in the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest being organized by our school, I am very pleasing to tell you more details about it.

The contest was hold in our school gym from Oct.7th to Oct.10th, aiming to arouse our enthusiasm for the Chinese traditional culture.So fascinating and interesting the contest that a lot of students entered for it.The contest included reading and reciting and I participated in all.I have had a deeper understanding about the ancient poems but I am motivated to improving my writing ability.

I do hope you will enjoy what I told you.Unless you want further informations, please let me know.

Yours

LiHua

【答案】第一句 of改成from

第二句 删除being;pleasing改成pleased

第三句 hold改成held

第四句 interesting后面加上was

第五句 all改成both

第六句 but改成and;improving改成improve

第八句 Unless改成If;informations改成information

【解析】

本文是一封信,李华在信里向Alice介绍了学校组织的古诗文背诵大赛的具体信息。

第一处:考查动词短语。句意:我很高兴收到你的来信。动词短语hear from收到来信,hear of听说;根据句意可知应该使用hear from,所以要把of改为from。

第二处:考查过去分词。句意:得知你们对我们学校组织的古诗文背诵大赛很感兴趣,我很高兴告诉你更多细节。句中名词短语“the Ancient Poetry Recitation Contest”与动词organize构成被动关系,要用过去分词短语充当定语,而being organized表示正在进行的事情,与句意不符,所以要删除being。

第三处:考查形容词。句意:得知你们对我们学校组织的古诗文背诵大赛很感兴趣,我很高兴告诉你更多细节。形容词pleased意为感到高兴的”,pleasing意为令人高兴的,根据句意可知应该表示pleasing改为pleased。

第四处:考查语态。句意:这次大赛107日至10日在我校体育馆举行。主语the contest与动词hold构成被动关系,要用过去分词。所以要把hold改为held。

第五处:考查部分倒装句。句意:这次比赛如此吸引人和有趣以至于很多学生都报名参加了。当“so+形容词放在句首的时候,要使用部分倒装句,所以要在interesting后加was,构成部分倒装。

第六处:考查代词。句意:这次比赛包括阅读和背诵两部分,我两项都参加了。代词both通常指两者,本句中指代前半句提及的reading and reciting。而all要指三者或者三者以上的事物,所以要把all改为both。

第七处: 考查连词。句意:对古代诗歌我有了更深的理解并且我被鼓励提高写作能力。根据句意可知上下文是并列关系,所以要把but改为and。

第八处:考查不定式。句意:我被鼓励提高写作能力。动词短语motivate sb to do sth激励某人做某事;本句使用被动语态be motivated to do sth被激励做某事;所以要把improving改为improve。

第九处:考查连词。句意:如果你想知道更多的信息,请让我知道。根据句意可知应该使用表示肯定含有的连词if,所以要把Unless改为If。

第十处:考查名词单复数。句意:如果你想知道更多的信息,请让我知道。名词information是不可数名词,没有复数形式,所以要把informations改为information。

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