Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你校将组织在校师生本周六去游乐场(amusement park)游玩。请写封邮件邀请外教Bryan同去，内容包括：

1.出发时间、地点；

2.游玩的项目(划船、骑车、喂鱼等)；

3.表达期待。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Bryan,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bryan,

I have good news for you. Our school is going to organize a trip to an amusement park this Saturday. It’s my great pleasure to invite you to come along. We will set off at the school gate at two o’clock this Saturday afternoon.

There are many interesting events in this trip, such as rowing, cycling and riding roller coasters. Appreciating flowers and feeding the fish can make us get closer to nature.

I’m looking forward to your arrival and hope we can have fun together.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文体裁的提纲类写作，要求考生写一封邮件，在邮件中：邀请外教Bryan去游乐场玩；告知他出发时间和地点；告诉他游玩的项目。

第一步：审题

体裁：一般性应用文——邮件（书信）

格式：格式是书信，要写明写信的对象（即称呼）和写信人（即署名），正文前可适当添加问候语，还要有结尾语

要点：要包括三个要点——邀请外教Bryan参加学校组织的去游乐场的游玩；告知他出发时间和地点；告诉他游玩的项目。。

结构：总分总法

第二步：列提纲（重点短语和词汇）

organize ; amusement park ; invite; set off ;events I; get closer to; nature

第三步：连词成句

Our school is going to organize a trip to an amusement park this Saturday.

I have great pleasure to invite you to come along.

We will set off at the school gate at two o’clock this Saturday afternoon.

We will go rowing, cycling and riding roller coasters. Appreciating flowers and feeding the fish should be interesting.

第四步：连句成篇

充实相关细节内容

第五步：润色修改