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10.中国女药学家屠呦呦在2015年获得了诺贝尔医学奖,是所有中国人值得骄傲的一件事.请根据以下提示介绍屠呦呦的故事.内容包括:
1、屠呦呦,女,药学家.1930年12月30日生于浙江宁波.1951年考入北京医科大学.毕业后,她投入到治疗疟疾的研究中.
2、因为发现了青蒿素,她在2015年获得了诺贝尔医学奖.
3、你对屠呦呦的评价.
注意:1.字数100词左右
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
参考词汇:药学家 Pharmacologist
疟疾 malaria
青蒿素 artemisinin
诺贝尔医学奖 Nobel Prize in medicine.

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类人物介绍作文,根据提示信息来写一篇介绍屠呦呦的作文,要注意以下几点:1、屠呦呦,女,药学家.1930年12月30日生于浙江宁波.1951年考入北京医科大学.毕业后,她投入到治疗疟疾的研究中.2、因为发现了青蒿素,她在2015年获得了诺贝尔医学奖.3、你对屠呦呦的评价,不能脱离题目要求;4.注意时态语态和词汇的用法;5.适当使用高级句式,词汇要多变,给文章增色.
   亮点说明  本文结构紧凑,描写细致到位,而且使用了多种句式和结构,有一些高级句式,如a great pharmacologist of my country与the first Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in Medicine运用插入语的手法,With hard work and determination,she discovered artemisinin,which is of great significance for curing malaria.运用定语从句.词汇短语丰富多变如be proud of 以某人为荣,be devoted to 献身于

解答 Tu Youyou,a great pharmacologist of my country,was awarded the 2015 Nobel Prize in Medicine for her discovery of artemisinin.(高分句型)
    Born in Ningbo,Zhejiang Province on December 30th in 1930,she was admitted into Beijing Medical College in 1951.After graduation,she devoted all her efforts to the research in treating malaria.With hard work and determination,she discovered artemisinin,which is of great significance for curing malaria.(高分句型)
Tu Youyou,the first Chinese citizen to win a Nobel Prize in Medicine,is hard-working and modest.(高分句型)Her discovery is seen as a big contribution to the human health.All our Chinese are proud of her.

点评 应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯,比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词,使文章流畅、通顺,并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感.(1)认真审题,确定体裁. (2)构思要点.根据题目要求,理解要表达的要点.设计好文章的层次段落,考虑所用时态、人称等,把要点串联起来,构成文章框架.(3)选词造句,避难选易.(4)认真检查,避免错误.仔细阅读全文,查找是否有错,注意时态、单词拼写、字母大小写、标点是否有误,句式是否正确.逻辑是否一致.

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