Question

【题目】假设你是李华，准备与你的英国网友John交流你校学生在校使用手机情况，请用英语给他写一封信，要点如下：

1.你校学生在校使用手机的现状：查资料，信息交流，玩游戏……

2.你对此现状的看法。

3.询问对方学校学生在校使用手机情况。

注意：1.词数100左右。

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I am writing to share with you how the students in our school use mobile phones at campus.

More and more students carry mobile phones into school searching for information or communicating with their friends,which makes their school life more colorful and convenient.But at the same time,some spend too much time playing games by mobile phones,resulting in their poor health and decline in study.As far as I am concerned, mobile phones should be made good use of by students in a proper way.

I wonder if you could tell me how mobile phones are used by the students in your school.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲式作文，主要要包含的内容已经给出，只要再进行适当的扩展即可。要求作者与英国网友John交流你校学生在校使用手机情况。

文章内容要点已经给出。但考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1. 文章是对某个话题进行议论，一般以一般现在时为主。

2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流畅。

3. 注意文章要以一定的逻辑顺序进行叙述，表述清楚自己的观点和看法，细节把控要到位。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满

【范文亮点】

优秀词汇和短语：colorful多彩的、 convenient方便的、at the same time与此同时、As far as I am concerned在我看来、Looking forward to期望

优秀句式：

1.But at the same time,some spend too much time playing games by mobile phones,resulting in their poor health and decline in study.运用at the same time、spend …doing…和结果状语从句。

2.More and more students carry mobile phones into school searching for information or communicating with their friends,which makes their school life more colorful and convenient.运用定语从句，使句子更高级。