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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及-一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As the saying goes, many little drop of water make an ocean. A small action may lead to major changes took place in society. My friends and I had participated in a voluntary activity at a nursing home last week. We first did some cleaning or washing. After that we spent half an hour chatted with the old people living there. Though it was a tired day, we were happy with that we did. I felt a sense of responsibility by visiting the old. If all of us lend a helping hand to the people in need, they can live in harmony with each other. A society is just as a family. If we are willing to help others, our small actions can make big difference.

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【解析】1.句意：很多小水滴。many修饰可数名词复数，故把drop---drops。

2.此处是现在分词做后置定语。故把took---taking。

3.根据last week可知句子用一般过去时态，故把had去掉。

4.句意：首先我们要进行清洗。此处是并列的递进关系，故把or---and。

5.固定搭配：spend---(in) doing sth.在做某事上花费---，故把chatted---chatting。

6.句意：尽管这是令人劳累的一天，但是我们对我们做的事情感到高兴。根据句意可知把tired---tiring。

7. 句意：尽管这是令人劳累的一天，但是我们对我们做的事情感到高兴。介词with后面是宾语从句，缺少引导词，从句中的did是及物动词，要有宾语，故把that---what。

8.句意：如果我们都能去帮助那些需要的人，我们就会和谐地生活。根据句意可知把they---we。

9.句意：一个社会就像一个家庭。故把as---like。

10.固定词组：make a difference有影响，产生意义，故在big前加a。