Question

近来很多高中毕业生利用暑假期间学习开车，请你根据以下提示写一篇有关学开车的利与弊的文章。

利	弊
1．一种非常有积极意义的经历 2．为你提供方便 3．给你独立的感觉	1．市内停车不便 2．费用较高 3．安全隐患

注意：1. 文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

2. 短文须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。

3. 词数：12 0词左右。

4. 参考词汇：

These days many high school graduates are learning driving during their summer vacation. In my opinion , learning to drive a car is a very positive experience for an individual. ____________

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Answer 1

【答案】

A possible version:

These days many high school graduates are learning driving during their summer vacation. In my opinion , learning to drive a car is a very positive experience for an individual. Knowing that you are able to drive makes you more confident. Also, ability to drive gives you independence, which means you can go wherever and whenever you want. It is much more convenient and quicker to get around in a car than to wait for a bus.

On the other hand, it is sometimes difficult to find a parking place in the city with the number of cars increasing so fast. Besides, it can be expense—not just to buy a car, but also to pay for petrol and all the repairs your car will need. Apart from that, lack of experience may get you into a car accident. If so, it will be wiser to take a bus.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。