Question

文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。

In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary.

Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us learn from each other. And that's why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.

To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers

                                               an

competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we

problems                          However

stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and

stressed                                                   both

necessary.

 

Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make a

 

remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and rather,

                                                                      or

challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with

                      making

each other, it's impossible for us ∧learn from each other. And that's why most of the great

                           to

discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.

To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the

successfully

relationship between competition and cooperation.

【解析】

1.文中第一行a改为an，因为English首字母发音是元音。

2.第二行中，a series of一系列，所以problem改为problems。

3.第二行中，这里表示然而，所以Therefore改为However。

4.第三行中，对现在的虚拟，所以stress改为stressed。

5.第三行中，all 改为both，文章提及的是竞争与合作，是两者不是三者，所以用both。

6. 第四行，第二个a去掉。Progress是不可数名词，用零冠词。

7. 第五行，and改为or，or rather表确切地说，是固定搭配。

8. 第六行，made改为making，这里making为后置定语，属于主动结构，相当于which makes……

9.第七行，us与 learn间加to，for sb. to do是不定式的复合结构，是句子的真正主语。

10.文中第九行，successful改为successfully，修饰动词短语需用副词。

考点：考查学生对词汇语法的掌握情况

点评：答题中注意句子中人称和数是否一致，时态是否一致。各种词性之间的区别以及一些常用句型，固定短语的应用。一般的这类题型不会出现太复杂的单词和句子，这类题型考查的就是我们的基础知识。平时应注重积累，熟记一些句型及惯用结构。修改前先细读短文，标出出错的位置，改完以后还得细读短文，看看改过后的短文是否语意通顺，符合逻辑。