Question

【题目】假如你是李华，是金鼎中学校刊记者，请你为校刊写一篇英语短文，介绍最近在我国很多城市发生的雾霭（haze）天气。请参考以下要点：

危害；

原因；

如何自我防护；

注意：

1、词数100左右；

2、开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Recently haze pollution has happened in cities of China

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently haze pollution has happened in many cities of China. It is one of the most dangerous weather conditions. Many accidents have occurred due to low visibility caused by haze. What's worse, it also affects our health. If breathing in haze, people may feel uncomfortable and get ill.

The reason for haze is air pollution, which results from waste gases releases from cars, factories or constructed sites.

In view of the above, we do need to protect ourselves from haze pollution .First of all, in case of haze pollution, neither should we open the windows nor take exercise before the sun rises and after sunset. Besides, we'd better wear masks when we go outside. What's more, we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to diseases.

【解析】题目假设了你的身份，即校报记者，要为校报写一篇英语短文，介绍最近在我国很多城市发生的雾霭（haze）天气。同时参考以下要点：危害；原因；如何自我保护。

文中的亮点：

本文中对于“原因”这一词的表达用了多种形式的表达。“Many accidents have occurred due to low visibility caused by haze. What’s worse, it also affects our health.”、“The reason for haze is air pollution….”等，形式多样化地表达同一意思，使文章更加生动而不单调。

本文中使用了一些语法知识。如非限制性定语从句1：“The reason for haze is air pollution, which results from waste gases released from cars, factories or construction sites.”。和定语从句2：What’s more, we should eat more fruit, from which we can get enough vitamins to build up the resistance to diseases.

使用了强调句：“we do need to protect ourselves from haze pollution.”

状语从句“in case of haze pollution, neither should we open the windows nor take exercise before the sun rises”。

倒装句“neither should we open the windows nor take exercise”。

动词的过去分词作定语“waste gases released from cars”和“low visibility caused by haze。”等。

这些复杂句，复合句及固定句型等语法的使用提升了文章的档次，展示了较高的运用英语的能力。

文中使用了一些固定短语：what’s worse，in view of，first of all，after sunset. besides, what’s more等，丰富了文章的内容，使文章结构更加完整而充实。