Question

假设你是新华中学的学生李华，不久前参加了学校举办的英语演讲比赛。你的英国朋友Tom发电子邮件询问你参赛的情况，请根据以下要点给他回封电子邮件。
内容包括：
1．感谢对方的关心；
2．因为赛前不够重视，没有充分准备，比赛时紧张，结果初赛被淘汰；
3．此次经历给你的感受和体会。
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇：英语演讲比赛English Speaking Contest淘汰eliminate
Dear Tom，
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
Thank you for your concern! But I regret to tell you that I was eliminated in the first part of the English Speaking Contest. The main reason is that I didn’t attach much importance to it and was not well prepared. Besides,when standing on the stage,I was so nervous that I made some mistakes.Though the judges thought highly of my skills of the speech,I had to face the fact. From this experience,I realized my shortcomings and learned some lessons.As the old saying goes,failure is the mother of success.If I have another chance,I’ll take it and try my best to succeed.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

试题分析：考查应用文中的书信的写作。你的英国朋友Tom发电子邮件询问你参赛的情况，请根据以下要点给他回封电子邮件。要点都已经给出，书信类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意时态的选择，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。
【亮点说明】范文使用了一些常用的短语： regret to“很遗憾的做…”，attach much importance to “非常重视”，think highly of “高度评价”The main reason is that I didn’t attach much importance to it and was not well prepared. 这句话用了表语从句， when standing on the stage,I was so nervous that I made some mistakes.这句话用了状语从句的省略和so …that…句型， As the old saying goes,failure is the mother of success.这句话用了非限制性定语从句和谚语文章还使用了Besides,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。