Question

假如你上周末参加了某旅行社组织的所谓生态游，你觉得名不副实。请你根据下表内容把自己经历的这次生态游和对真正生态游的看法写出来。
1. 所谓的生态游：
欣赏风景，享受新鲜空气
有人摘花、捉鸟、乱扔垃圾
2. 真正的生态游：
享受自然，同时也是一种责任
要保护自然，保护野生动物
带走美好回忆，留下青山绿水

Answer 1

Last weekend I went on an eco-travel with a travel agency. All the way we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and fresh air. But a few of us picked flowers while going sightseeing. Some even tried to catch the birds they saw. What was worse, many tourists threw rubbish here and there. The rubbish may do harm to wildlife there.
　I don’t think this is a true eco-travel. A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well. As we enjoy the beauty of nature, we should try our best to protect it. And we should also try to protect wildlife. A true eco-travel should be like this: take nothing away but your good memory; leave nothing behind but all the green trees and the clean water.

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲式的作文，关于人们关注的旅游问题。从所谓的生态游到真正的生态游，分两段展开描写，要点是以提纲形式列出，提示里都已经给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，注意用地道的英语表达。适当运用高级词汇和句型，时态以现在时为主。还要注意句与句的联系。如范文的句子A true eco-travel is a tour that not only allows us to express our love for nature, but needs our responsibility as well.
点评：本文属于提纲类短写作，此类短文写作要求包括提纲中所给的所有要点，不能有遗漏。使用合适的连接词把要点连接成流畅合理的短文，变化使用高级句式让文章的档次更高。