Question

10．近些年来，随着网络的普及，越来越多的学生的书写能力明显退步了．为了改变这种局面，保护民族文化--汉字，我校学生会提出以下倡议：
1、减少课外上网时间，多读书；2、养成每天记日记的好习惯，练习书写；
3、少发电子邮件，尽量动手给亲朋好友写书信．
请你根据以上内容，代学生会写一封英文倡议书．
注意：
1、词数：100左右．2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．3、汉字（character）
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Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting，we'd like to offer some suggestions．为了保护中国的民族文化提高书写水平，我们提出以下建议：
高分句型二：
First，we should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books．
首先，我们应该少花时间在网络上，那样才有更多的时间来阅读．
句型一 In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting…该句在句首使用了固定短语：in order to do sth 为了…放在句首作目的状语
句型二 so that we can have more time to read books  该句是一个由so that 引导的目的状语从句
除此以外，还有以下短语和高级词汇：what's more 而且     form the habit of doing sth 养成．．习惯

解答 In recent years，many of us spend a lot of time on the Internet with its popularity．As a result，we don't write as well as we did in the past．In order to protect our Chinese characters and improve our handwriting，we'd like to offer some suggestions：（提出话题）（高分句型一）
     First，we should spend less time online so that we can have more time to read books．（高分句型二）Besides，we'd better form the habit of keeping diaries every day to practice handwriting．What's more，it is better to write letters to our relatives and friends by hand rather than send e-mails．（方法展示）
     As the saying goes，"The style is the man．"Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial to us students．So please pay more attention to our handwriting in the future．
     Let's take action now!
                                                                                                                                                                                                       Students'Union

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．