Question

【题目】书面表达（共三节，满分30分）

第一节：单句改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

【1】Art is influenced by customs and faith of a people. Styles in Western art have changed many times.

【2】Some of the first poetry a young child learns in English are nursery rhymes.

【3】My first visit was a space station considered the most modern in space.

【4】To prevent this from happening again, John Snow suggested that the source of all the water supplies examined.

【5】Copernicus' theory is now the basis which all our ideas of the universe are built.

【6】He did not want to be attacked by the Christian Church, so he only published it as he lay die in 1543.

【7】It is an imaginary line divide the eastern and western halves of the world and is very useful for navigation.

【8】Among the painters who broke away from the traditional style of painting the Impressionists, who lived and worked in Paris.

【9】With so many different forms of poetry to choose, students may eventually want to write poems of their own.

【10】The second theory suggested that people should absorbed this disease into their bodies with their meals.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】by后面加the

【2】are改为is

【3】was后加to

【4】examined改为be examined

【5】which前加on

【6】die改为dying

【7】divide改为dividing

【8】painting后家were

【9】choose后加from

【10】should去掉；into their bodies with their meals去掉

【解析】

【1】by后面加the。be influenced by是固定搭配“被……影响”后面接名词，customs and faith of a people 做介词宾语，意思是人们的习惯和信仰。名词前面必须加冠词，因此customs和faith前本应有一个冠词修饰，但是当and连接的两个名词从属于同一中心词时，则只用在第一个名词前加定冠词the。

【2】are改为is 。从句中看出 Some of the first poetry a young child learns in English 整体作为句子的主语，后面的be动词为句子谓语动词，主语中包含了一个定语从句，first poetry是先行词，在从句中做宾语，因此省略了引导词which。所以主语的主干为some，of的介词短语修饰some，所以谓语动词应该使用单数形式。故将are改为is

【3】was后加to。句意为我首次访问了被认为是最现代化的空间站。因此considered the most modern in space.做定语从句，修饰前面的太空站，space station 为表语，前面必须接to提示地点否则句意发生改变，成为韦德第一次旅行是太空站

【4】examined改为be examined。在suggest所引导的宾语从句中主语为the source of all the water supplies examined为谓语动词，根据句意知水供应来源应被检查，故应使用被动语态be done形式。故在examined前面加一个be

【5】which前加on。在这个定语从句中the basis为先行词。其固定搭配为the basis on 因此这是一个不及物动词，不能直接放在从句的动词后面，必须加上介词on，所以应在which前或built后加上on

【6】die改为dying。句子后半部分中as引导了一个条件状语从句，lay是谓语动词，同一句子中不能有两个谓语动词，因此die不能使用原形，应使用v-ing形式，die分词形式为dying因此lay dying表示奄奄一息弥留之际

【7】divide改为dividing 。it is an imaginary line 为句子主干，后面的为一个定语从句补充说明line。Divide为主动，因此使用v-ing形式，修饰前面的先行词line

【8】painting后家were。句子前半部分为一个介词短语和一个定语从句who broke away from the traditional style of painting，句子主干为painters，因此缺乏谓语动词，所以必须在the impressionist 前面加上be动词，由下面的lived和worked可知，应保持时态一致，因此加上谓语动词were

【9】choose后加from 。choose是一个不及物动词，当其后面接宾语时必须加上介词from，因此在不定式中，当前面的名词与后动词形成动宾关系时choose后面的介词不能省略

【10】should去掉；into their bodies with their meals去掉。suggest可以表示建议，或暗示，表明，当他表示建议时应该使用虚拟语气，should加动词原形，但是当其表示暗示，表明时则不用虚拟。在该句中suggest是暗示的意思，因此不用should。并且absorb就是吸收的意思，与后面的介词短语意思重复了，因此需删掉。