Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学学生会主席李华，请你代表学校给外教Chris写一封邮件，邀请他来参加你校学生的成人礼，并向他简要介绍活动情况，包括以下内容：

1.时间、地点；

2.活动内容；

3.活动意义。

注意：1.词数不少于50。

2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

提示词：成人礼Coming-of-Age ceremony

Dear Chris,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris,

I’m president of the Student Union. On behalf of our school, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our Coming-of-Age ceremony. It will be held in our school auditorium from 8 a.m. to 10 a.m. this Friday.

First of all, students will present flowers to their parents and teachers to show their gratitude. After that, our headmaster and one of the parents will deliver speeches to express their congratulations and best wishes. At the end of the ceremony, the students will make an oath that they will shoulder their responsibilities from then on.

I really hope you will come and witness this meaningful and unforgettable moment.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。这类文章可分三段来写，第一段先自我介绍，表明邀请；第二段讲述活动举行的时间、地点、内容、意义等；第三段期待对方的回复。

同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

一、通篇要以一般将来时时为主。

二、要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用恰当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然。

三、注意语气。写信要注意人称，先介绍自己，加上敬辞。

可以采用简单句和复合句结合的方法，内容要丰满。

【范文亮点】

1、范文采取了短语（First of all，After that, At the end of the ceremony,）使文章显得层次分明。

2、文章采用了On behalf of our school, take part in our Coming-of-Age ceremony等高级短语。