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书面表达（满分25分）
有人说， 父母为孩子包办一切是孩子成长的最大杀手。的确，太多的中国家长习惯于为孩子包办一切。假设你是李华，请针对这一现象给某英语报社编辑写一封信并阐述你的观点或建议。
1、简述这种现象；
2、分析其弊端（从独立性、兴趣能力、影响等方面去分析）；
3、你的观点或建议。
注意：1、词 数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3、开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
4、参考词汇 独立性independence;抵制resistance
Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents tend to make almost all decisions for me.
                                                                              
                                                                              
                                                                              
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I’d like to tell you some of my problems with my parents in daily life. My parents tend to make almost all decisions for me. They choose the school and subjects for me. Sometimes even clothing and daily timetables have to be decided by them.
In my opinion, deciding everything for children does not help them but harm them in many ways. Firstly, it will make children lack independence, which is unfavourable to their development in the long run. Secondly, in many cases parents’ decisions go against children’s personal ideas and interests, which will make children form resistance and naturally influence their growth.
I do believe to grow to be independent is a natural way for everybody. Parents should give us chances to make our own decisions. They may help us make choices instead of replacing us to make choices.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

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