Question

5．当前大学生毕业后，很难找到合适的工作，请简要分析这一现象产生的原因并提出你的建议．你的作文应包括：
●中学生普遍缺乏职业规划教育 （career planning education）；
●大学的专业设置与社会需求存在脱节现象 （disconnect）；
●你的建议．Tape Scripts and Answers．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一篇关于大学生毕业后，很难找到合适的工作的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：当前大学生毕业后，很难找到合适的工作，分析这一现象产生的原因并提出建议．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分为大学生毕业后，很难找到合适的工作．第二部分为这一现象产生的原因．第三部分为作者的建议．
重点短语与句型：
as follows 如下
the professional learning 专业学习
social demand社会需求
become more and more fierce变得越来越激烈
accumulate relevant work experience积累相关工作经验
only when they start looking for a job did they realize that they lack the necessary vocational training此句用了only+状语从句，部分倒装
it is strongly recommended that college students do some part-time jobs in their spare time to accumulate relevant work experience．此句运用了it is recommended that虚拟语气，should 可省略．

解答 There is an increasing number of graduates from universities who find it's more difficult to find a good job．（当前大学生毕业后，很难找到合适的工作）
Nowadays，more and more college students complain that it is hard to find a good job．Caused reasons for this phenomenon are as follows．First college students spend  most of the time in the professional learning at school，only when they start looking for a jobdid  they realize that they lack the necessary vocational training．Second，there is a disconnect between the professional setting in University and social demand．（分析这一现象产生的原因）
The competition among college students is becoming more and more fierce，which leads to the less chance of any college student to find a job．Therefore，it is strongly recommended that college students do some part-time jobs in their spare time to accumulate relevant work experience．（建议）

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．