Question

短文改错

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：每处错误及其修改仅限一词。只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计。

　　Peter Judd joined in the army when he was eighteen, and for several months he was taught how to be a good soldier．He did quite good in everything except shooting．One day he and his friends were practice shooting, and all of them were doing quite well besides Peter．After he had shot at the target nine times and had not hit him once, the officer who was trying to teach the young soldiers shoot said, “You’re quite hopeless．

　　Peter! Don’t waste your last bullet，too! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it!” Peter felt shameful．He went behind the wall, and a few seconds later, the officer and the other young soldier heard the sound of a shot．

　　“Heavens!” the officer said, “Has that silly man really shot himself?” He ran behind the wall anxiously, but Peter is all right．“I'm sorry, sir．” he said, “and I missed again．”

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第一行：去掉in 　　第二行：第二个good改为well 　　第三行：practice改为practicing或practising 　　第四行：besides改为except或but；him改为it 　　第五行：shoot前加to 　　第六行：正确 　　第七行：shameful改为ashamed 　　第八行：soldier改为soldiers 　　第九行：正确 　　第十行：is改为was；and改为but