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5．银川一中的校刊英语专栏正在开始以"健康的生活方式"为主题的英语征文活动，你打算参加．请根据以下提示信息写一篇英语短文．
1．营养均衡的膳食； 2．经常参加体育锻炼；  3．乐观的人生态度．
注意：1．字数：100左右．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯．
All of us want to live a happy life．                                 

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
To begin with，it's important that we should have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．首先，我们应该有一个平衡的饮食，因为我们需要充足的营养以使身体成长．
高分句型二：
In addition，taking exercise regularly is of equal importance，which can help us keep fit and release stress．除此以外，有规律的锻炼是同等重要的，那可以帮助我们保持健康释放压力．
句型一 ①it's important that we should have a balanced diet 该句是一个由it充当形式主语，后面跟一个由that引导的主语从句 ②because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．该句是一个由because引导的原因状语从句
句型二 ①taking exercise regularly is of equal importance 该句是一个动名词短语作主语的句子，动名词或者动名词短语作主语时，谓语应注意使用单数 ②which can help us keep fit and release stress 该句是hi一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在定语从句中作主语，替代前面整个主句的内容．

解答 All of us want to live a healthy life．The following are some useful tips．
   To begin with，it's important that we should have a balanced diet because we need adequate nutrition to grow tall and strong．（高分句型一）Not only should we take in enough grains and meat，but we should also eat fruits and vegetables．In addition，taking exercise regularly is of equal importance，which can help us keep fit and release stress．（高分句型二）More importantly，we should develop a positive attitude，which allows us to look at things positively，no matter what happens．Even if we are in a difficult situation，we should never lose hope．（方法罗列）
   Proper food，regular exercise and a positive attitude will help us live a healthy life．（总结全文）

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