Question

【题目】Guided writing

现在网络媒体过多关注明星(celebrities)绯闻，而对于科学家及真正对社会进步做出巨大贡献的人们关注和报道不足。请各举一例说明此现象，并谈谈你的看法。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, the network media pay too much attention to the celebrities' gossip, but not enough to the scientists and the people who really make great contributions to the progress of society.

For example, our middle school students may not be able to tell who invented hybrid rice, but they must know which celebrity has produced what new TV series recently. I think our mass media is mainly responsible for this phenomenon. The media pays too much attention to the entertainment news of stars and ignores the scientists who really make contributions to the people. I think the country should take necessary measures to correct this bad social atmosphere and win social status for our scientists.

【解析】

这是一篇开放性写作。

第1步：根据提示可知, 本篇为一篇开放性写作；现在网络媒体过多关注明星(celebrities)绯闻，而对于科学家及真正对社会进步做出巨大贡献的人们关注和报道不足。请各举一例说明此现象，并谈谈你的看法。

第2步：根据写作要求, 确定关键词（组）, 如：network media （网络媒体）；celebrities（明星）；pay too much attention to（太过关注）；make great contributions to（做出贡献）；be able to（能够）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句, 注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般现在时。

第4步：连句成文, 注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡, 书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。