1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(∕)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last Friday,my class took part in a meaningful and challenging course-Outward bound.Upon arrival,we divided into several groups by the coach there.Short afterwards,we got involved in various activity.One of them were jumping across a broken bridge.I was afraid of at first,so with the encouragement of the coach,I finally made it.What impressed myself most was climbing over a wall to"escape".We helped one another and all of us manage to"survive".Before we left the center,we had a photo taking to record the unforgettable experience,that gave us a good change to build up courage and improve our sense or teamwork.