14.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每次错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(

),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Discover the real you.Don't blind accept the role you are conditioned of others to play.You have your own path to follow it.Be your own independent person.Accept full responsibility for your life.Don't live as a doormat,a sheep,and a victim.You must accept that you're the creator of your life and that no one came to rescue you.
Build the courage to express ourselves.Voice your truth.It's well worth heard.If some person react negatively,that's their problem.Ask for what you want; you can't expect others be mind-readers.Directly tell others what you want to be treated.If you don't speak up for yourself,who will?