7.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处只涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用(\)划掉;
修改:在错的词下面划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均只限一词.
(2)只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.
Dear Martin,
How are you doing recently?Learned that you have retired,we all miss you.On behalf of my schoolmates,I?m written the letter to express our deepest thanks to you.
We?re grateful for you have done for us over the years.It is you that helped us make great progresses in our English.When some students got into trouble,you suggested they improved their learning methods and always helped us out with patience.We still remember what fun we had when you told jokes in class.All of us value the precious time when we spent together.We will keep it on mind forever.
We true wish you good health and a wonderful life after retirement!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.