增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词作斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。

I often went for a morning walk because the nature is at her best in the morning. The best place I like to go is the park where is not far away my house. In the morning, I can breathe the fresh air, hear the birds singing, but enjoy the beautiful sunshine. For the whole day, I will feel happier and more relaxing. My morning walk protect me from illnesses and improves my healthy. In my opinion, the morning walk is too healthy that I can’t love them more.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Of all my teachers, Mr Smith is the one who impress me most. While he is in his 40s, he looks very young for his age. Compare with other teachers, he pays many attention to the way of teaching. He tries various way to make his classes lively and interested. In his opinion, we should not only know “what it is”, but to understand “why it is so”. He encourages us to think independently instead giving us the answer to a question immediate. Under his guidance, we’ve learned what to solve problems. He is so learned a person that we all admire her.

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。

I attended to a summer school in London this summer. Once we had a debate on “Which is better, a blog or a book?” We were divided two groups. My group supported blogs. During the heating discussion, I pointed out that blogs were better than books for their convenience and low price. Then another student from the same group added, “A blog also builds connections between the writer and the readers, and between the readers who feelings are similarly by comments and replies. This communication further adds up a good social order.”

It suddenly occurs to me that all the reasons I had given were just based on the benefits of one side—the readers. And my classmate considered the connection between people and society as the whole, which impressed me a lot.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Two men were traveling together while a bear suddenly met them. One of them climbed up into the tree. The other, seeing that he must be attacked, immediate lay on his back on the ground. When the bear came up, feeling him with his nose and smelt him all over, he held breath. The bear soon left him, for it’s said that a bear won’t touches a dead body. When he was gone, the other travelers went down from the tree. And he asked his friend that the bear had whispered to his ear. “He gave me a piece of advice,” his companion replied. “Never to travel with a friend who deserts you in the face of danger.”

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号() 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Sir,

I'm writing to you for the mobile phone which I buy on 20th August 2016 at Attracting Shopping. Ten days after that, it didn't ring or could it send short messages. Then I reported it to the seller, but was told that the model had been selling out and I had to wait at least three month for a new one. Then I wanted it to repaired, but he said since it was a new model, it was impossible to fixing it without the right spare parts. How disappointing I was by hearing that! How can I wait that long? However, I have to write to you and ask you to have the phone replaced within a week or return me back the money.

I'm looking forward to your early reply!

Sincerely yours

Li Hua

篇短文，介绍上周你与外国朋友Tom 在颐和园的经历。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：毛笔a writing brush

(请务必将作文写在答题卡指定区域内)

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线（ ），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last weekend we went mountain-climbing. Even the heavy rain in the morning could not prevent us go. Setting off very early, we went along an extreme narrow road, all in high spirits. On every side of the road were green fields and some farm house. We could hear the sound of the rain and our footsteps mixed with laughter. At noon we reached top of the mountain. That surprised us most was the beauty of the scenes here. After having a short rest and sharing with the food we had brought, we started going down. It rained even harder. We are wet to the skin, and we still sang and laughed happily.

选用方框内合适的短语并用其正确形式填空（每个短语限用一次）。

【1】He ______________ the telephone receiver and asked a number.

【2】After a series of changes, the company seems to ______________ now.

【3】He is ______________ a real lack of money this month.

【4】The strong wind ______________ the leaves off the street.

【5】Daniel ______________ the room when no one was looking.

【6】During the war there was a serious ______________ food; many people died of hunger.

【7】Don’t forget to ______________ the lights before you go out of the room.

【8】He said he ______________ completing the task on time.

【9】That song always ______________ me ______________ the happy days when on campus.

【10】I ______________ my former teacher while I was shopping out today.

【11】The fires were spreading ______________ in the dry conditions.

【12】The place was so crowded. In no time, we soon ______________ him.

要点如下：

1. 描述图片内容；

2. 你的感想。

注意：1. 同数：100左右，开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数;

2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3. 参考同汇：交通礼仪traffic etiquette。

Dear Editor,

This is a picture of a busy road.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

根据语境，用方框中所给短语的适当形式填空。（每个短语仅使用一次）

【1】____________ people gathered on the square watching the fireworks.

【2】More than a dozen people ____________ of the avalanche(雪崩) alive.

【3】Just wait for me on the spot; I will come ____________.

【4】All the students ____________ the heavy rain yesterday.

【5】Do you often ____________ the headache after you have a cold?

【6】When we arrived at the cinema, the film was nearly ____________.

【7】A big fire left the house ____________ when I was very young.

【8】It seemed ____________ he had known the bad news.